That short was written very well, but the editing. Ugh. The split-screen I could almost have forgiven as some whacked-out style if it was done all the way through, from the very beginning to the very end, but it still would have been annoying. Especially when it overlapped, when Brad had his head on Andy's shoulder and you could pretty much see the entire image on both sides. Ow.
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Date: 2005-12-16 05:16 am (UTC)at least he's getting the fuck out of there.
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